What's that in the mirror, or the corner of your eye? What’s that footstep following, never passing by? Perhaps they’re not just waiting, perhaps when we’re all dead Out they’ll come a slithering, from underneath the bed
If i happened to be in that room, with all the lore surrounding it and after the creepiness that has already happened, there is a good chance that I would have already vacated the room. When the man (who I was sure was normal before) suddenly gets glowing eyes, there would be no more questions asked: I would be GONE
Excellent work again. colors really evoke the mood. The eyes are....spectacular, albeit a bit creepy, but seeing paranormal things is already creepy, and it helps contribute to the mood. BTW: look up some pictures of Shan Yu and see his eyes.