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FMM_Spies_Page 01 by tohdaryl FMM_Spies_Page 01 by tohdaryl
Page one of a short story based on a song by Coldplay.

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BagelInternational Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
beautiful <3
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BabakoSen Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:iconmanlytearsplz:
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BloodMoon-Wolf Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012  Student General Artist
MAN OH MAN I LOVE THIS SONG AND THIS LOOKS EXCITING
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:iconcenturyking:
CenturyKing Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Which Coldplay song is it??
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:iconroukon13:
RouKon13 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i just love your style :)
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cromArt Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
beautiful tones mate!
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Faitherix Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I really adore the set up of the second panel, overall there's great composition work in this. i don't think you'll ever go back to tweak this but if you do maybe consider in the second panel how the knob edge lines up with the shadow on the mask, it's a tad flatening. the other thing would be the panel size of the last four panels, I was a little thrown off with the order of how to read them. -shrug- nit pick things but everyonce in a while it's nice to hear something to help things become a bit more clarified i think
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Rivenmist Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ohhh! Another epic! Can't wait! You're stories are always so fun to read! ^__^
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Andrea095 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2012
I love coldplay <3
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:iconlonelyfishy:
LonelyFishy Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2012
for a moment i was thinking of the Fatal Frame ending with the water/Laterns. x'D
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:iconwarriornun:
WarriorNun Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
He's not alone...
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p3n9u1n9uru Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
That is pretty much my favorite Coldplay song. It's just so haunting and mystifying.
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VickyLynn Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Hm.. which song by Coldplay?...
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:icongijett:
gijett Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Does this remind anyone else of Fatal Frame 3? It does for me.
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jerichojim Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
wow
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:iconrenstability:
Renstability Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
What song? ;u; if it's obvious I'm sorry for asking a stupid question
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Farisade Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2012
its actually in the title ;)
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:iconrenstability:
Renstability Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh XD okay yep obvious and I was being a der der
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ZeacorZeppelin Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2012  Student General Artist
Awesome.
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PuddingPack Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2012  Student Digital Artist
You display the panels so well, Im in love with the way you set up the mood.
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:iconnoki-day:
noki-day Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2012  Student Writer
But you can't touch spies! D: How is he going to fight them!
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:icontechno56:
Techno56 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2012  Student General Artist
Awesome picture and I cant wait for the upcoming pages! :D Plus You have an awesome taste in music!! Coldplay all the way! :D
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:iconjuno08:
juno08 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2012
*candle goes out*
FMM: Shit....
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:iconwacky-w:
wacky-w Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2012  Professional Filmographer
Wonderful choice of layout and composition in these frames. Wonderful sense of tension, despite it being a fairly peaceful environment. I love it. Can't wait to see what happens next
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ChRiStIaN4LiFe Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2012
I'm curious now, which song?
Fix You maybe??
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:iconnoki-day:
noki-day Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2012  Student Writer
Spies.
[link]
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:iconchristian4life:
ChRiStIaN4LiFe Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2012
Ah, lovely!
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sunwukung22 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2012
He chopped that candel in half by using the vibrations of the Shamisen
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dieingcity Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2012
I love the feel of how your starting out this short story- I really enjoy your work and the stories you have done
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ChrisJingles Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
I sense....Ninjas
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:iconkinetii:
Kinetii Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2012
MMMMM.
Someone is here. >:U
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TheSnowDragon Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2012
Coldplay, you say? I think I already know where this is going...
I love that song!

Once again, your coloring skills amaze me. It sometimes looks like it's taken straight out of a movie!
Can't wait to see what happens next. C:
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